Amir's Guilt

In Mrs Sanders lesson today, we discussed the essay involving Amir's guilt. I had re-wrote it, in order to improve it because some of my ideas were unorganised and confusing, even to myself. I found that if I put the narrative viewpoint first in my essay, it should be easier to 'hang' my ideas from it and expand them. I think I needed to make Hosseini the centre of my essay, by uses phrases such as "I wonder why Hosseini...". In this way, I think it helped me to structure the essay and to channel my ideas across to the reader. I am currently finishing off this essay, by summarising by points and adding in a few extra ideas and themes involving Amir's guilt.