The Kite Runner- Narrative Viewpoint

We started the first few paragraphs of our essay concerning Amir's guilt and we swapped with each other, so we could share ideas. I found that I was trying to squeeze too many ideas into one essay, which resulted in disjointed paragraphs that didn't make too much sense. I found that I need to concentrate more on the narrative viewpoint and construct my ideas around that. I am currently re-writing this essay, using these points, so in the future, I will be able to write a coherent essay.