Amir's Guilt-techniques

On Friday, we looked into incorporating key terms into our essays, so it would be clear what we were writing about. In GCSE, we didn't need to include key words, such as "metaphors" or "adjectives", but when analysing The Kite Runner, at A Level, we did, so as to explain out point in more detail. I started to change parts of my sentence structures, to add in the techniques Hosseini uses and I incorporated more of my ideas into the essay.